A lovely, detailed description here, Jason. You have enveloped us in silence -- hard to do with only words. Thank you for leaving off the headphones and letting your stroller hear his/her own imagined music. Thanks for taking me on your night walk.
Thanks for the kind words, Sharon. This type of first person scene work is a really gratifying exercise for me. I’m enjoying zooming in on the small and the quiet.
Cather in the Rye vibes! But it kind of reminded me of this one too:
https://www.riversidelocalschools.com/downloads/pedestrian%20short%20story.pdf
Very cool. Wasn’t really trying for either tonally, but Bradbury is certainly one of my favorites. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for sharing.
My pleasure, man. Keep on writing!
A lovely, detailed description here, Jason. You have enveloped us in silence -- hard to do with only words. Thank you for leaving off the headphones and letting your stroller hear his/her own imagined music. Thanks for taking me on your night walk.
Thanks for the kind words, Sharon. This type of first person scene work is a really gratifying exercise for me. I’m enjoying zooming in on the small and the quiet.
I love when I read a story that just happens to be in the same season. It drew me in immediately!
Great story! I wanted to hear more.
Thanks. I try to make them timely when I can.